So its pouring outside now and I'm feeling the urge to nap. I'm just going to throw some old stuff up on here again, to keep the habit. I missed two days and don't want miss any more.
This is a short story that didn't quite reach its completion. As it is, its just a vignette, without a real conflict or resolution. It is an anthropomorphic story, the characters being animals and all. My attempt at a zombie story I guess.
Tristam
The fennec ignored the call and wrapped the robes tighter
around him to block the wind driven sand. The sun beat down on the opposite
side of the dune and the corpse above.
The voice came back across, sharp and more insistent.
"Tristam Sahar, please reply. Rifle shots heard in lower corner of dune
sector. Repeat, please reply."
Tristam grumbled and mashed the mike key. "Yeah, I'm
here, Cobbe. I'm here."
The accent dropped back into a lazy drawl again.
"Copy, Tam. That shot yours?"
"Yeah. Had a night runner on my hands. I didn't want
her to reach the oasis." Tristam replied as he adjusted the rifle to lie
beside him.
Cobbe's reply was sharp with surprise. "It got that
far? Well, I'll be in that area soon. Got any good for trade?"
Tristam patted a solid packed pouch and glanced up at the
corpse above him on the dune crest. "Sure. Come just after sundown."
He replied into the mike.
Cobbe's answer was swift. "Sundown, affirmative. ‘Til
then."
This next item is just some practice I did writing in a character's voice. Its just over a paragraph. There is one particularly brutal visual though.
Soldier's voice
"I'm not a
hero, so don't expect me to tell my story like one. I'll tell you the truth.
I've been alone, I've been hurt. I've lost courage and deserted when someone
needed me the most."
"Every
one's got a breaking point. One man it may be staring down the barrel of a
shotgun, and realizing the risk isn't worth the wage. For some, its the mother
shielding her children selflessly. Others, its the infant being ripped from
it's parents. The feel of your fist crushing the small delicate bones in a old
man's face. Even the wet crunch your rifle butt makes as it pulverizes the
skull of a child. Mine was a simple toy; a toddler's toy."
Once again, just old stuff but it keeps me towards the habit.
Laters!
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